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Thursday, February 27, 2020

Changed Poem

I have thrown
The apples
that were to
Soft


And which
you were
probably
Waiting to
Harden


Forgive me
they were 
Terrible
So soft
And so bruised

The black is the original words the blue has been changed.

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