Roberts writing challenge

Challenge 1

The sinister man said he saw the occurrence of an elder guardian. There is a thing that if you see a guardian you will have a massive fortune of gold. So the next day he had to admit his ticket to go to the movies. It was about a disgruntled man that was emerging from the water from the dead and it was like a zombie apocalypse. A lot of people muttered that it was rubbish and it should have a one star rating and they’re giving it bad ratings and when it was done I had to mention that it wasn’t very good then watched a reality TV show.

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Hi my name is Tom I’m a year six boy and I’m 10. I have one younger brother. My favourite sports team is Real Madrid they play football and my favourite food is Indian. My favourite subject at school is reading. My learning goals are to complete the questions in reading and write good stories in writing. I am good at running, football and gaming.